Matter of factness and Indignation
The master beat the scholar the scholar with a stap.
The master beat the scholar, with a strap.
I try to tell somebody what the steaming Hibrides were like, and first thing you know I'm telling about the old Tonkinese woman who used to sell human heads. As souvenirs. For fifty dollars.
According to Fowler the difference between the first two sentences is... you got it... matter-of-factness and indignation.
Now, someone tell me who wrote the third sentence. I love this game.
(This lesson in punctuation as an art comes from An American Rhetoric by Watt, by what? No, by Watt
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